Reggie,

I really enjoyed reading your blog this week, your sketchnote was great! Specifically, you were very thorough with your explanations, especially the learning principles. Overall, I think your blog utilized the coherence principle because of how concise your blog was. I found there was limited “fluff”, which I really enjoyed. Next, your use of the segmenting principle eased the learner’s understanding. The way you broke up your analysis of the Bad News game from the Sketchnoting segment aided the readability of your work. I wonder if, next time, you could elaborate on “why” you would pre-train your audience to be familiar with the concept demonstrated in the Bad News game. This explanation would make your writing even more clear and concise. However, overall, you did an awesome job!

Paige